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@moorejacqueline moorejacqueline commented Jun 18, 2024

What does this PR do?

Suggest revisions to --help text for lightning preview app and lightning preview site to make sure content aligns with CX standards.

What issues does this PR fix or reference?

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@moorejacqueline moorejacqueline added the wip Work in progress label Jun 18, 2024
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LGTM 👍

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A couple of suggestions, but overall this seems good to me!

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@moorejacqueline , the help looks awesome! Very nice job.

Most of my comments are either suggestions for adding a tad more information to help the user, or me being a bit confused about wording, possibly because I'm just not that familiar with LWC. I have a few direct edits, but nothing big.

Important: please make sure that the site.ts file is updated to show the command description (i added a comment) -- currently, because the crucial line was removed, the --help isn't showing any command description at all.

Happy to do a second review after you deal with my first review, but only if you want -- it's not necessary. Cheers!

@moorejacqueline moorejacqueline requested a review from nrkruk July 8, 2024 21:30
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@nrkruk @jshackell-sfdc noticed the lightning.preview.component.md file, and we're wondering if we should remove it or leave it alone (since it sounds like we aren't supporting sf lightning preview component in 252). Thanks!

@moorejacqueline moorejacqueline force-pushed the moorejacqueline/revise-help branch from 9ee6c64 to 5b5336d Compare July 30, 2024 19:41
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@moorejacqueline , see a few little edits, nothing big. Otherwise, the help looks great!

I'm sure devs are on it, but just for completeness, I noticed these two things:

Thanks!

FYI @nrkruk

@nrkruk nrkruk removed the wip Work in progress label Aug 8, 2024
@nrkruk nrkruk merged commit 0974dbb into main Aug 8, 2024
@nrkruk nrkruk deleted the moorejacqueline/revise-help branch August 8, 2024 18:05
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